1-sine
He woke up slowly.
As he got up and looked around, he saw an unfamiliar sight.
It was a dusty path among a forest of autumn trees, and the sunlight rushed in from the small gaps in the leaves. The trees themselves were unmoving, only rustling every once in a while. Flame-red leaves were also descending from above the treetops.
However, the scene did not sooth his anxiety. He stood up, trying to make sense of his position. Where am I? What is this place? Sweat trickled down his face, and he dashed down the path.
Running out of the forest, he stopped in awe.
It was a large pasture like nothing he had seen before. The grass vibrated in response to the larger wind, and waves appeared on the entire area of grass. The bright rays of light shone upon the field, and the grass seemed to glow slightly.
Far away, next to a rather large mountain, he saw a small settlement. His heart beat faster as he sprinted towards the direction of the smoke. I might get some information there…
He was not disappointed.
A few houses dot the foot of the mountain. He decided to try the largest one in the batch.
Walking up to the large wooden door of the house, he drummed the door with his knuckles.
March 18, 2007 at 9:27 pm |
woah, cliffhanger. i desire MORE!
March 24, 2007 at 11:10 pm |
D:
Shouldn’t have left it at that. You would be disappointed with the anticlimaxes.
April 16, 2007 at 7:06 pm |
However, the scene did not sooth his anxiety.
soothe.
A few houses dot the foot of the mountain.
dotted.
Drummed seems a bit of an odd verb to choose.
Can I proofread? or draw? or something? i seriously need practice.
April 16, 2007 at 11:11 pm |
:V
Seems too much like work.
Also, when did you start becoming a grammar nazi anyways?
April 27, 2007 at 9:42 pm |
what, I’ve always been grammar nazi.
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